Irish Girls - Lunch

Okay, I've taken a long hard look at this. While this is a pleasing image and your girls are as gorgeous as ever, I have spotted a handful of glitches.

First though, the concept and composition are great, I love the idea of the follow up to to the last image. The scene is simple enough but lacks a little more clutter for my tastes. The girls should obviously be the focus but the background appears a little bland and the placement of the bottles doesn't make use of the free space.

The poses for the girls are fitting to the scene though I do see some anomalies.

Ruby does indeed look a few in, love how she's letting things slip hehe. I do spy a couple of areas of poke through: left boot, by the arch and the bottle opening, I can see her thumb in there.

Paige looks great and the only thing I can see regarding her is her line of sight, to me it doesn't appear to be focused on the cupcake, more so the necklace.

Caitlin seems to be looking at Ruby if I'm not mistaken and is her hair (right side) having clipping issues with her lapel?

Overall I love the image though it does seem a little clinical to me, too clean and bright.